Missing piece is a triangle. He wants to find something who can match with him, but he can’t. He waits for a long time. Then he meets the big O, he wants to go with a circle, but the big O refused him and said: Have you tried? After a circle left, missing piece used his power to do some changes. He keeps forward to go, and finally he becomes a circle, like the big O.
After reading this book, I feel a deep meaning in it. We always feel that we couldn’t do anything because we haven’t prepared well, it’s too difficult, and not to try it once, but eventually we can’t succeed. Always depended on others is not a good way in your life. Making a goal and finish it, not just fool around all days and the time left.
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Hello Dylan
Your article idea is great and similar with me. But I find some problem is your article.
In the first paragraph line 3 “he meets the big O”, I think it is better to use”encounter”. In the second paragraph line 1 “I feel a deep meaning”, if you use “realized”, it will be greater.
Mengyeng Yu (Mark)
Hi Dylan
Mn~ your article looks good.But you have some problems.Like this one " but the big O refused him and (said: Have )you tried?" you should use "." . By the way Mark your opinion has something wrong,"But I find some problem is your article" your "is" should use in. Jangchong Chung(claud)
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